Traitor’s Daughter

I have put the first chapter of my medieval Welsh romance, Traitor’s Daughter, on my website. Please have a look and a read.
http://www.lilydewaruile.com/TraitorsDaughter.htm
Let me know what you think. I will appreciate any comments, thoughts, suggestions.
Diolch yn fawr.

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Filed under Cyfraith/Celtic Law, Cymreig/Welsh, Hanes Cymru/Welsh History

2 responses to “Traitor’s Daughter

  1. Hallie Adams

    I have enjoyed the first chapter very much and await the second chapter to find out the wants of Alys and if Heledd would ever escape to another life. The history of such a beautiful country is intriguing. I also enjoyed reading “About Lily”. I was surprised to learn that Thomas Jefferson, John Adams and 12 other signers of the Declaration of Independence had roots in Wales. The first chapter of “Traitor’s Daughter” draws you in and makes you want to read more.

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  2. Thank you for your comments, Hallie. I’m glad you enjoyed the first chapter – I’ve received some excellent comments and suggestions, made a number of revisions and removed the chapter from the website – sound advice from one reader.

    The history of Wales and the impact of the Welsh is a mystery – the country and its people just get on with things. I’m sure you’ve heard of J P Morgan – Welsh. Many more American presidents had Welsh roots as well.

    Thank you again.

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